Comments : Thoughts of Mine

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I truly loved this poem. Mainly because it let us see inside of your heart.... you can tell its not fake emotions.

    I think a lot of people can relate to this.... at least, I know that I can.

    Beautiful, even if it doesn't rhyme. 5/5 <3

  • 12 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    I can totaly relate to this........good job,very emotional

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Not all great poems rhyme.. This is beautiful. Genuine and sad.. Great write 5/5 :) Keep writing

    -X