Have you ever...

by Rihanna   Mar 17, 2012


Have you ever
fell for sum1
But didn't care bout
How you felt?

Have you ever cried
your heart out
But knew it wouldn't
get you no where?

Have you ever 
watched the one
you love walk away...
Not wanting to feel
the pain after they leave
You destroyed?

And as they walk
Away you whispered "I love you" quietly ...
Wanting them to
know how you feel

You cry all night
and hurt
Falling apart
Only wishing he was their

If I had to choose between love and death,
I think I'd rather die

Love hurts
There will be a day were he
Will leave and you will be destroyed..........

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  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Wow. i can totally relate!

    Have you ever cried
    your heart out
    But knew it wouldn't
    get you no where?

    Have you everÂ
    watched the one
    you love walk away...
    Not wanting to feel
    the pain after they leave
    You destroyed?

    with my ex he just broke up with me for really no reason at all :/ it hurt so bad and i cried so much but now im like for what?

    loved it!

    5/5 :]]

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You did a great job of sending out the message of the sadness you felt. the agony of how it can be. Over all you did a great job
    My only suggestion is don't abbreviate ( sum 1) write it out it makes for a better look , and a better read.
    5/5 good write

  • 12 years ago

    by andy

    Mmm havent we all been there apart from the guy leaving in my case lol

    i liked the way it was written and the meaning of your poem good job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    This was amazing as always hun <3 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This has been well written babez..loved how you keep the readers glued to it, making them reflect on their lives. The second stanza was my fav.

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