This has been well written babez..loved how you keep the readers glued to it, making them reflect on their lives. The second stanza was my fav.

This was amazing as always hun <3 5/5!

Mmm havent we all been there apart from the guy leaving in my case lol

i liked the way it was written and the meaning of your poem good job :)

You did a great job of sending out the message of the sadness you felt. the agony of how it can be. Over all you did a great job
My only suggestion is don't abbreviate ( sum 1) write it out it makes for a better look , and a better read.
5/5 good write

Wow. i can totally relate!

Have you ever cried
your heart out
But knew it wouldn't
get you no where?

Have you everÂ
watched the one
you love walk away...
Not wanting to feel
the pain after they leave
You destroyed?

with my ex he just broke up with me for really no reason at all :/ it hurt so bad and i cried so much but now im like for what?

loved it!

5/5 :]]