Sunday morning frame by frame

Thanks for your kind comment

Love this poem, good work on a Sunday morning

Hi

Great suggestions, I alter in a version two, loved it
the biggest heartfelt thanks

Ole, I think this is a piece loaded with brilliance if we try to avoid the structure and some errors. So I suggest you look to this version of yours, this way:

It is Sunday morning...

And I'm with the camera,
skipping frames and kodaks -
myriads of pictures taken...

Recalling places,
skies and fragrances,
thinking about the heat...
though I'm wrapped up
in the cold.

I kept touring around,
thinking of love...
how you share me strength,
and I bid you romance.

Love capture in pictures, though, I like better the love that is capture in the pictures of our own memories but in the paper or digital can be good too for bringing the memories out the archives. good job