Comments : Rescue You~

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Omg MaryAnne, your tone all through is really fascinatingly alluring!

    And wherever she is,
    she will light the empty
    taverns of your soul.
    There will be fading shadows
    and all you once betrayed
    will be cast away
    into something that can be used
    to heal....

    ^ I really like the usage of 'taverns'... It shows how much heavy and gloomy the soul is.

    She will make you unafraid
    and help you fight
    for who you are.

    ^ I'm sure the 'she' is you. And you penned this write.. lovely!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    And wherever she is,
    she will light the empty
    taverns of your soul.
    There will be fading shadows
    and all you once betrayed
    will be cast away
    into something that can be used
    to heal....

    Just an awesome stanza to go with a really good poem..Excellent MaryAnne