Your poem shined with such beauty and love. You don't know how much I enjoyed your writing!
I love the easy-flowying rhymes and the short stanzas and simple words you used to get a monumental message across.
The ending made me smile, we always have to remember to not give up because who knows what we will miss?
A heartwarming piece, you address so much heartache and pain that a lot of people can easily relate to, yet you bring the sunshine out at the beginning and in the end.