Victor-
I've mentioned this before to you In pm.. and now I'm going to say it again... what i can decifer, I feel you have a powerful message... and I would like to enjoy reading your poetry... but you need to put spaces between your words... I know you can, you have done so In titles... and even a little bit within this piece... Its just going to really help the reader.. so that they can read your poem... I'm just trying to help and I'm even wondering if your having a problem with your space bar sticking... I look forward to one day finish reading this piece, because like I said, I feel you have a wonderful message, just want to be able to finish reading It~

Make that two.
I'm fascinated with poems that talk about time so I feel this one will be good to read but it's tough to get the message without the spaces. :(