by Lady Nik Mar 19, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
For so long I've been here |
by Nella
So i thing i didn't do was cry profusely... i felt every single word!!! excellent work |
Full of emotions. Words coming from a bleeding heart. Could feel pain from every single word. Very nicely expressed. |
by HvN
The 2nd verse is beautifully written and holds such pristine meaning that it evoked tears to fall from my eyes before I could stop them. As for a title, might I make a suggestion? How about "Forgotten Memories" to signify the lost of memories one had before a tragic time and or happening occurred, a time that was once lively and happy. Anyway beautiful poem Nik, 5/5. |
by Reaper
Very sad :( but wrote it beautifully! |