Void

by tiger girl   Mar 19, 2012


In the dark she sits alone,
Pondering all the thoughts they will never know,
How much more can she take before the final blow?
They see her pain but never speak,
Their ignorance beyond skin deep.
If only she would go on and seek,
Help from those that love her, let them get a peek,
The scars may not hurt so bad,
She may not find herself so sad.
The void in her heart would still remain,
But maybe then she'd feel back in life's game,
Things could get better not continue on the same.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    I loved your lines!Nice sad poem with great rhymes...
    Well written!

    Steven

  • 12 years ago

    by gasping for air

    You have some serious potential here. Ive never been one for rhyming poetry, i have a hard time with it, you did well on the rhyming but i would work on the flow (if you ever revise it) but its got depth to it, and theres really awesome potential here!