by tiger girl Mar 19, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In the dark she sits alone, |
by Steven Croat
I loved your lines!Nice sad poem with great rhymes... |
You have some serious potential here. Ive never been one for rhyming poetry, i have a hard time with it, you did well on the rhyming but i would work on the flow (if you ever revise it) but its got depth to it, and theres really awesome potential here! |