by kellie goldman Jun 26, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
--please comment, even if u don't like it-- |
by Zayda
Ok, im so glad ur not tryin to impress anybody, u've impressed me, though... ur poems r great, not fo' da way u write (that sucks, y do we have to rhyme when all we're tryin to do is express ourselves straight... thumbs up) but wut u've got to say... ur poem is rly good... keep up!!! |
just so everyone can get this straight, i know my poems aren't the best and i really don't care. i don't right to impress anybody but myself. i have feelings inside in which i cannot talk to any of my friends or family about because they all think i'm a happy little girl who still has a life to live. maybe u should try reading my other poems and then see what u have to say. |
by Tiffany
Hey im not the same tiffany lol....^but shes kewl she commented my poem too.....but yeah that poem was ok..you need some ..well idk improvement.. .....if you ever wanna look at mine or exchange and rate...i have AOL.... shamelessthought <thats y sn..... |