by Marvellous
A little more sifting of thoughts on this, will certainly make do. I mean, if you could summarize your points more closely than leave them explicit. In-as-much as you pay closer attention to your spellings too, the rhyme scheme, is spot-on! All the same, a true friend, heals wounds. Keep inking till you're done thinking. Continuity brings perfection. |
by kimara4955
Hi, thank you so much for your comment, I do really appreciate it, and was just wondering, what could I do to make it better. I'm always looking to improve, and your advise would be appreciated. thanks Kim. |