by Tilly Toe Tottes xx Mar 19, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Stop all the flowers |
Thank you very much , :) |
by Lizbeth
I really like the beginning and end of this poem.. i think you could really go somewhere with it. It's deep. It just seems the middle doesn't fit. It's really good though :) I know with my poems i'm always going back and rewording lines to make it sound better and express how i feel a lot better too. |