Awww :( thats really sad

Oh hun this is so terribly sad. I have an image of death here, the idea that his last breath will be yours too. Very poetic.
So much is said in this short poem but there's also a lot of emotions present.

Beautiful

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Was a nice short poem to read full of emotion :) keep up the good work

:( exhale the last breath. This is a sad poem and I like the shortness of it because it's pack with the emotion and it can be felt when reading it.