"Poets,
love of my life,
the sun in my eye,
that which is keeping
me alive

I surrender mercilessly
Don't you ever stop writing! "

be gentle on my heart kid...I'm gonna die soon..

*try to watch for words in the middle of the sentence that are capitalized when they shouldn't...

*read your poem out loud to see if you really did need the "." or a "," when you were try to create the pause effect..

because if you put a full stop it breaks the flow a little my love,
other than that,I'll tell you I'm not fond
of exclamations points in poetry, but I liked it in this, it made it so adamant, omg...even when reading it I felt it in my head as if someone was screaming it to me

it was powerful and moving all in one because while you are begging for one to never stop writing, you also explain all the things writing means to you...

your word choice is always tasteful omg...

also also, the comma in your title love..
It isn't really needed...

other than that, I have no other critique to give

you amaze me always, you have such a soft and loving personality, but your words contain so much fierce its like they are the opposite of you..

You rock! booomdooom boom bass :)