Comments : My War

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    This is soo amazging!

    How you wrote that you've been chewed up and spit back at everywhere U turn you have been beaten and yet your still standing tall
    Just amazging !!

    I loved it...
    5/5 great job

    Xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Whispy.Gypsy

    Wow i love it as well! its got alot of meaning to it and i can relate to it on how i was treated through out my life and i can c what uve experianced

    5/5 keep up the great work please :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Great write youve been thru alot yet still standing strong :) awesome write!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I've been chewed up and spit back out
    Beaten every which way I look
    Made several rounds through the meat grinder
    And yet here I continue to stand

    i really this stanza. Just says of what you have been through and how you have always endured to rise on your feet again. Really creative and wise choice of words.

  • 12 years ago

    by Flight Risk

    Hawt damn, this poem gave me some major chills! If I could give you a standing ovation I would, but instead I'll just -give you a round of applause- I think this is a remarkable poem - showing your strong will power and courageous character! It's something I really admire and I agree with this poem, it's very inspirational to me too - so I want to thank you so much for sharing and keep on' at it ;)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    This kind of like me and how i am :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Very powerful, strong emotion. very well written poem. great job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    This is a really good poem. It shows your strength and passion to keep on living when your world is dark and nothing but a bully. Very inspirational for me... thanks for enlightening me. Definitely one of my favorites.