Falling (for Justus)

This is a nice one...you express to this poem your true feelings towards justus..i really praise for your both love to each other..gudluck:=)

This poem was really perfect
Straight to the point. Amazging

Falling again,
Falling hard.
Knowing he won't,
Leave me scarred.

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Falling hard every time
Because knowing he want leave you scarred. Loved that stanza it said a lot, you kept it simply and straight to the point.

Falling now,
Falling again.
I'm so glad,
I let him in.

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Second stanza
Your always falling for him knowing your so happy you've let him in.

He's brought me,
So much joy.
Finally am not,
Just someone's toy.

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I really loved this third stanza
Knowing his brought happiness in your life. Then you mentioned how your not a toy anymore, the last line said a lot, how your not going to be treated like a game being pushed and played with like a toy.
Really well written

He doesn't treat me,
Like a kid.
And letting him in was the best thing,
I ever did.

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I loved how you ended it by giving that message to the readers that he dosent treat you like a kid and letting him into your life was the greatest thing. Really good way of ending it

This poem was so sweet 
Showing how much he means to you how he treats you well

Love it
Great job 5/5 x

This was beautiful. great poem. really.

This was such a sweet poem! Ive read quite a few of yours and Justus poetry and I admire the connection of love you both dedicate to each other here on P&Q. Its so heart warming to read yours and his because your both here.

Omg u dnt even know how much i love you