Only you.

by Kayla Sonya Dearing   Mar 20, 2012


I shed these tears
As I let you go
I shed these tears
As you let me go.

As I walked away
My heart would not allow it
As I walked away
I fell against the dark soil.

The man I once had standing there
I could nolonger feel him.
The man I once love
I could no longer felt his love.

I could not see the light
I could not see the shadows
I could not feel his spirit
i could not feel the pain.

Now that your back
I only shed tears of happiness
I only see him standing in the light
I only see him standing in the shadows

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Well written with a touching message behind it.

    Em

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Nicely written. I like the message of your poem, very touchy. Overall, great! Keep writing more:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Very well written. I would only suggest you not capitaliza the first letters to a continuing sentence especailly in stanza 1. Apart from that, i would also say the repetition throws off the flow of the poem so avoid that next time.

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