My savior, where are you?

by Jennifer   Mar 20, 2012


My savior, where are you
Cant you see i need to be saved
Have you forgotten me,
or did your wing broke
Are you on the ground,
surrounded by demons
Are you the one that needs to be saved
Or did you just get tired by saving me?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Thnx :) yeah i`m not that good in grammar since i come from another country than i wrote on my profile. But my grammar will be better ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Broke should be broken or brake. Okay thats just one grammarical error, though there are a few more. The emotion is strong and heartrending. The style is nice. I think the piece could have been longer though its not neccessary cause the message is clear. But I like the piece and think its a job well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    It's so sad.. To feel like no one's there for you anymore...
    A 5/5 for the emotion you put into this poem.
    Keep writing!

    -X

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