It's so sad.. To feel like no one's there for you anymore...
A 5/5 for the emotion you put into this poem.
Keep writing!

-X

Broke should be broken or brake. Okay thats just one grammarical error, though there are a few more. The emotion is strong and heartrending. The style is nice. I think the piece could have been longer though its not neccessary cause the message is clear. But I like the piece and think its a job well done.

Thnx :) yeah i`m not that good in grammar since i come from another country than i wrote on my profile. But my grammar will be better ;)