by tainted melody Mar 20, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Softly weeping as he begins to die, |
That is so emotional, I almost broke down into sops, those words joined together in such a materpeice and without doubt from a very loving heart, filled with heartflt words and dreams up ahead! |
This was beautiful! ;] |
by Emily
Ohhh..... so sad n beautifully written u gotta 5 frm me |
by White Orchid
This was amazing! It was so good you could actually picture what was happening & felt the emotion as well. I think this deserves to be published and think it's very well written, you definitely have some talent as you already know. :p great job! :) |
by Moonlit Candles
This was a great poem. A lot of emotion displayed through affection between the two lovers here. Also told a story of their life just by this poem. Nice write. :) |