Comments : A Road to Light the Way~

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    You are grateful MaryAnne.. and rarely do I see grateful people like you everyday.
    This is a bliss, and I hope you'd be blessed all your life. I know God loves you..

    cheers my friend :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, I liked this one.

    What I got from this poem is the message which I so strongle believe in : Everything happens for a reason. It is not always the way we want it to be, but it is the way it is meant to be.

    You have created a very lovely poem using the simple things like what we witness each day.

    My favourite part is : until our minds are
    tempering with the weather
    inside our souls.

    I have never read anything like this before and it really stands out to me, very powerful and I am sure a lot of readers can relate to the battle we have inside ourselves.

    I choose to read this poem because of the title, It sounded such a hopeful poem, which it turned out just to be. So thank you.