Please Don't

by Angel   Mar 21, 2012


I see the pain you inflict upon yourself,
I see it's your silent plea for help.

I know it's yourself you want to kill,
And your heartseems empty and nothing can fill.

But you know your death will not be sweet,
It will only leave you in the burning heat.

Hell is where the evil fall,
And evil is what you are not at all.

It seems as if you've lost your way,
But still you live through every day.

You're stronger than you think you are,
You're bright and shining like a star.

I know that you can win this fight,
So please do not take your life.

For anyone who is hurting right now

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Great poem!I loved it!:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Reyna

    Thanks for writing this one Angel. You know where I stand right now and I need this. I'm sorry if your mad at me. I couldn't open up today. But this poem has saved me for now. Lov u girlie
    R.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow this was so heart touching and soo sad!

    I know it's yourself you want to kill,
    And your heartseems empty and nothing can fill.

    ^^
    That stanza was so sad, you killing yourself cos ur heart is hurt and empty and nothing will ever fill it , just how u wrote it was beatiful

    You're stronger than you think you are,
    You're bright and shining like a star.

    ^
    That was so beautifully sad love,
    You stronger than u may know
    Ur shining bright, wow so beatiful like always (:

    Great job love
    5/5

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