Comments : The First Real Tear

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I love how you penned this...
    Great read 5/5

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This almost reminded me of a court hearing. I thought this was a great poem. Really expressed a lot of emotion in the way the guy had to tell them what they want to hear but he doesn't want to. Nice write. :)