Illusion Of A Fantasy.......(Does Love Exist ) ?

by lOsT sOuL   Mar 21, 2012


Where do I go, which way do I turn
searching for that love I so desperatly yearn
fading memories of a past I'd soon forget
isolated and alone waiting for the one not met.

Is she just a vision or does she really exist
illusion of a fantasy like a ship in the mist
the truth of it all remains to be seen
for in this moment of time I can only dream.

Laying awake I stare into the night
doom and dread surround, like the demons I fight
river of emotions flow like a swift moving tide
spiraling so fast downward I slide.

Will ever I find that peace, I do not know
breaking down more with each passing blow
desperation and pain a part of everyday life
words not spoken that cut like a knife.

    report violation
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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    If you ask me this poem sounds unfinished,,like you want to fit the whole world into,,as if you had centuries of feelings ready to explode and speak but excellent job,,well written,,amazing emotion flow and wording,,that really helps the poet or reader to grasp your poem and what you feel and more so for all who relate,,I am very positive I felt from when I asked these questions,,still do but I have also overcome them as well and I'm sure everyone says it but one day,,that day will come....when least expect it and you will find the one u seek for she would be seeking you as well and that love will be great and I wish u luck on life's journey,,,,great poem I loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Good rhyme scheme ........if you believe in love -it exists.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    You'll find the girl that loves and u do too:)
    Everything will be great:)
    Its really sad, but I love it^_^

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