by Jenni
I have tried this form before and I have to admit that I failed badly, so I know how tough it is to actually manage to write it and then have a good outcome too. And I am happy to say that this is more than a good outcome. |
by Tara Kay
Sara, |
by Chelsey
Lol @ Jenni....Same here, a Triolet is so hard to do. I failed badly too. You have to find the perfect repeating sentences that will make perfect sense next to other sentences all throughout your poem! Its hard! |
by DarkLight
Hw i wish those words were meant fr me.nyc art |
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was a great Triolet. Your use of repititions worked really well here. I think they were great because for instance your part: |
by White Orchid
I loved this. Although I am not familiar with triolet poems I thought this had great flow and I liked how you described the feelings of the two people here and how they realized their feelings were deep, normally I am not much for repetitious poems but this one worked really well, I felt like the repitition here denoted more emphasis on the feeling you were trying to express therefore making the poem more powerful. Very nicely done! |
A good attempt at this form which can be so difficult to master. |
by Naughtymouse
Ive never heard of a triolet before....but then again i only wrote my first haiku yesterday lol, i love how this piece flows, very heart felt and honest, i also picked up on and love the part about infatuation and love being proved true, almost like you cant believe its love until it proven.....but just my interpretation of it though, great write :-))) |