Tattered Cries

by Breely   Mar 22, 2012


Its not so easy loving me
For a moment let me be
A dream with no composure
Hoping for some closure

I yell at these abundant skies
But my voice echos in my cries

Save me from myself
Before i fade away
Save me from a cry
Before i run astray
Save me from a fall
And let me see the day

Save me from myself
And love me for itself
Its not so easy loving me
So please let me free

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  • 10 years ago

    by Justanothertwit

    I like the rhythm here, I feel like rhymes in poetry are slowly dying and that makes me sad. I'm not much of a rhymer but appreciate the ones who are. I like this poem. I feel like it's one that could be read as spoken word and just sound awesome.

    I really like the first stanza, the line "A dream with no composure" is very thought provoking.