by silvershoes Mar 22, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Dangling, sagging |
Brilliant! Another powerfull piece of yours! I enjoyed the reading till my teeth got sunk in my skin. A poem strongly pointed to the heart. If I were the judge I'll keep you as the "all time top poet". That's why I chose you as one of my favorite author. |
by silvershoes
Lonely is 100% right. It's an allegory, not meant to be literal. |
Agree it is cutely worded. Not sure if it is for a love or just a fun, humorous poem from an apple lover. I am now convinced that it is the latter, for the love of an apple. ha! ha! Dare not interpret it here. |
by Decayed
Cheesy? |
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was a great poem. Found it to express feelings of laughter yet you could see just how annoyed the girl was cause of her height. The imagery and all was very nicely done. Nice write. :) |