by RainbowSlider Mar 22, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Never thought of me as daddy back then. |
by Moonlit Candles
Wow such a sad poem. You did really well here with the emotions. This poem told a great story and it kept me wondering what was going to happen next. Nice write. :) |
This shouldn't be in the Dark poems. It's beautiful in it's delivery, and emotion. Intense, and filled with realism..Excellent |
by Maple Tree
This poem just gave me an eye full of tears and an arm full of goosebumps! Powerful and beautiful poem! |