This poem just gave me an eye full of tears and an arm full of goosebumps! Powerful and beautiful poem!

This shouldn't be in the Dark poems. It's beautiful in it's delivery, and emotion. Intense, and filled with realism..Excellent

Wow such a sad poem. You did really well here with the emotions. This poem told a great story and it kept me wondering what was going to happen next. Nice write. :)