Comments : Diamond

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Their dreams made a silver rainbow
    that's now faded into grey."
    --> My favorite lines :)

    The diamond is a metaphor for love, I assume.

    It's quite common these days that love is overrated, yet carelessly swatted away like an annoying fly...

    Great write! 5/5

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is short but brillaint and wonderfully written. I would only sugget you dont capitalise words after a comma, it removes the flow of the poem.