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by Xanthe
"Their dreams made a silver rainbow that's now faded into grey." --> My favorite lines :) The diamond is a metaphor for love, I assume. It's quite common these days that love is overrated, yet carelessly swatted away like an annoying fly... Great write! 5/5 -X
by Paul Gondwe
This is short but brillaint and wonderfully written. I would only sugget you dont capitalise words after a comma, it removes the flow of the poem.