Comments : Ending a life long search

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I really like when people add the word "perfection" because it's true, when you find the one, a moment with them is perfect. . whether that moment be...... you start to really believe in perfection. . This poem is lovely to the deepest, and I like the face how you wrote "won't talk about the tears" I love that, dont dwell on tears just.. enjoy what has found you and be in love and live it up.. nicely written love poem ... :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for so many points and kindness in your comments.
    Some equals perfection with the word beautiful.
    For me perfection is when your soul, find the point of balance, the ponit of no tilt and filled with the feeling of this is right, the roght one, the right moment, the right person etc.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    A short but beautiful poem about the way you feel about your love.

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Ole!
    This can be a perfect song!! Especially this part:

    it took many years
    Won't talk about the tears

    I like the pace a lot and the emotions you pour effortlessly.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Thanks for kind comments and I love your remarks much appriciated