Don't be sorry...
Its an amazing poem, written straight from the heart. 5/5 <3

It really portrays your emotions well, and it really does express how sorry you are. . . .must be a sad situation to have made you want to write this poem. . . it really sucks when you want to help but you can't . . . ..helplessness is a sob

but good poem :)

Aww this shows how truly sorry you are
Ann letting out all your emotions

I love it darl(:
5/5 great job!

xx

Hmm..Guess u had a rush of emotions writin this poem...decent,simple and yes,well arranged.
I specially liked ur last 2-3 line imaginary and expressions,leaves a touch !
good work,
Appreciated !

Hmm..Guess u had a rush of emotions writin this poem...decent,simple and yes,well arranged.
I specially liked ur last 2-3 line imaginary and expressions,leaves a touch !
good work,
Appreciated !