Comments : Trapped with chains...

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Awww so meaningful and deep and I love every bit of it, every stanza,,simple but powerful and somewhat creative,,,I can see a play in my head as I read ur poem,,,amazing great job,,terrifically written :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow, that was so amazing.
    It felt so powerful.
    Great job.
    5/5
    -Shining Star