Comments : Given Up

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I really loved this poem, It flowed well, with basic rhyming but it worked. Its sad yet true and many people can relate. Gorgeous :) <3 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dakota

    Thank you :) I'm goin through a really lonely day today, and decided to write this in class. But again thanks, it means alot <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Wow this is really good. very heart felt. i loved the wording 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dakota

    Thank you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    This is perfect(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Dakota

    Thank you (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Areeba

    This was awesome.. It flowed so good.. Just loved it.. Enjoyable read (: