Comments : Forgive us, Mother, for we know not what to do

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Yup, may god/goddess forgive us for we do not know what to do.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Your magic has once again taken my breath with words so beautiful that they can't be praised. I enjoy your poems so much for they take me away from the normal place and transport me to a land where emotions live, and speak through the heart.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    That is so faithful of you, KArla.. a lovely piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem has so much knowledge and wisdom to it, that it really captivates the reader. I have to admit that at times I am not keen with repetition but in this poem it felt right and like it belonged here.
    I do hope too, that we will be forgiven for our actions.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla this is beautiful. It shows us how we're treating everything around us and we're asking mother nature to forgive us for it.

    I simply loved it

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