Wow I'm speechless
This made me cry! :'(

Please, please let my big brother be okay,
Please Kris, don't leave us this way

^
That stanza was short but so powerful
Thank god your ok I whouldnt kno what I whould of done if I lost you like that..

I love it
5/5

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Aaaaah I couldnt hold my teaSr:(
I wish u the best
great poem so powerful:)

OMG!! Kris @_@

You waited so long to go back to your family, I rememeber you telling me about it, I am so sorry that hapoened to you :/

This was heavy. carried alot of emotion. great job. wonderful poem.

Wow that was sad but amazing

Wow this was such a sad poem. You did a great job here. It all flowed very well together. And I just wanted to say I hope all goes well with that. Great write. :)

Oh my gosh that really made me cry i guess i kinda know how it feels sort of only i didnt get to see him before the crash i hadnt seen him in 4 yrs we were surrposed to meet up but he was in a hit and run he didnt make it

This one was literally so touching it actually gave me chills. the good kind. this sad poem really painted me a picture. amazing work

Broke my heart...: /