by Jump from Life Mar 26, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No longer breathing, |
by Lofallenve
Your poem here is wonderful. The emotion behind it is very strong. |
by Rihanna
Awwww darl I'm sorry u feel like this<3 |
The pain has become a blessing |
Thanks :) I'm glad you liked my poem, and I'll consider the revision. |
by Maple Tree
I have read this piece several times.... You have touched my heart deeply.... Darkness has a way of stripping a person down, to the brink of endless emotion.... the ending made my mouth drop.... powerful poem.... |