Ha!! This is amazing!!! I love that the last line are the first words in every line...that really fascinated me!

Excellent words you chose here...Bruised thoughts balancing...That was pretty much amazing.........I find your poetry educational..You give me inspiration to try new forms!

The hollow sounds like a really catchy title.

I also find this really good, I like the rhyming scheme and the repetition of the first letter of each word in each sentence.

Oh hun simple words but awesome. The rhyming is brilliant and catchy!!!

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I think this is the Andrea form, if I am right?

that is a good one :)