Awwwww wish i had a girlfriend who would hopefully wait.i like the diction of this poem.simple yet very expressive.5/5 for me

Hmm so well penned and gr8 emotion, flow is good and the over idea of the poem is gr8 good job 5/5

Awhh this is such a beautiful poem, its so lovely you can really tell that you love this person a lot, its just so cute!! Nice work on this lovely love poem :)

5/5

Wow. Very romantic and the emotion is great. I like the way you put the hyphen and the flow is good too. This is a cool poem:)
very good
5/5-C

A beautiful poem of love, I thought it was very interesting how you overlapped your sentences in such a way, it added a creative spark indeed.