If I were an artist.

by Mello193   Mar 26, 2012


I was born in poverty and abuse
i was dead in compassionate noose
and if i were an artist
would it even make a difference
can you hear the hollow screams
piercing through the silence

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    For being a miscellaneous poem it is quite well written. I like it a lot. And the line before the last had some powerful descriptions and the last line was simply amazing. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Short but not the least bit unfilling
    brilliance!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow sounds great.. i like the rhythm of your poems...this one is beautiful=)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Hmm good feelings..

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I really liked the last line it ended the poem in a great way:)

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