The Space Inside

I can relate to your words a lot. Amazing piece.

My eyes are deep blank vacant holes
Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness
Pulled under by the raging suction of isolation's vacuum
Drowning slowly in spaces inside
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This is my fav stanza, specialy that line too(Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness)

Your creative, great poem I love it:)

A nice poem, and I agree that line rocks...wish I would have thought of it haha

"Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness"

Excellent

"Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness"

^^^^ beautiful line....

This piece touches me... explosive poem... very nice~

Jen, I am always amazed by what you write. I always feel a deep connection with your poetry because they speak to me. I always find myself relating to your words and emotions.

This especially, I have felt like this many times and this poem is both heartbreaking and deep. The words you've used have really done justice to this poem, I think it flows brilliantly with your word choice and the imagery is great. I love the metaphors you've used as well.

An awesome write Jen,

Absolutely loved it!!!

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