Oh jenna jenna jenna...where do I start? First off this was great!....the first stanza and the second, I love how I felt like I was reading something out of a biology book...the black hole, omnipotent, stimuli...awesome words to describe feelings!!...seriously unresponsive to stimuli was amazing. I loved that line

Last but not least " suction of isolations vacuum"! Amazing personification. I loved that you gave isolation a vacuum because its so true it can suck the life outta you when you feel alone.....great piece, seriously sad, but I was sp captivated by your wording I didn't notice it was sad til the end lol

Jen, I am always amazed by what you write. I always feel a deep connection with your poetry because they speak to me. I always find myself relating to your words and emotions.

This especially, I have felt like this many times and this poem is both heartbreaking and deep. The words you've used have really done justice to this poem, I think it flows brilliantly with your word choice and the imagery is great. I love the metaphors you've used as well.

An awesome write Jen,

Absolutely loved it!!!

x

"Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness"

^^^^ beautiful line....

This piece touches me... explosive poem... very nice~

A nice poem, and I agree that line rocks...wish I would have thought of it haha

"Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness"

Excellent

My eyes are deep blank vacant holes
Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness
Pulled under by the raging suction of isolation's vacuum
Drowning slowly in spaces inside
^^
This is my fav stanza, specialy that line too(Expressionless face as the petals of solitude wilt to loneliness)

Your creative, great poem I love it:)

I can relate to your words a lot. Amazing piece.