Wow, very beautifully written. I love the way you explained so much and in detail in this poem, it rhymed smoothly as well. 5/5

Girl. You better have made this up!

Its an amazing poem.... goodness, it left me breathless and with tears in my eyes!

Please, tell me this isn't true.... Love you girl 5/5

Wow i love this poem it gave me chills seriously. So sad you expressed it so well. 5/5

I got scared for whole minute there.Great Job it ryhmed smoothly 5\5

Your ability to stir emotion is first rate. Your imaginative ability to mix with truth and thought is superb. You have a very special ability as a poet. It has been good to read your work. I will say though, that you do not appear to write as a teenager bit as a more learned individual. But no matter really, I enjoy you work.

Absolutly beautiful in a darker kinda way...I loved it
5/5

I really enjoy your poems alot, but one thing you should do is to double check your poems. Because the word 'naive' got out of character and probably that's why this poem is rated 4 instead of 5/5. So check for spelling errors