Tree Spirit

What a wonderful nature piece! It was so relaxing and refreshing to read. I just wanted to go sit under a tree and admire its beauty after reading this poem. You described a tree's spirit flawlessly with a breathy use of vocabulary. It just flowed together so nicely and I was just left wanting more of this serene scene. Trees are such majestic parts of nature that people can write books about it and it still wouldn't be enough. You packed it all in a nicely written poem that made me appreciate trees so much more. Loved it!

"breathing a wind chime song
tousled about within a breeze."

^Wow. If I had to pick a favorite part, which would be difficult, this would be it. I could hear the wind chimes in my mind so clearly and I ADORED your use of "tousled."

A inspirational poem of nature I truly enjoyed reading it as nature is our world of beauty that should inspire us

I love this poem. i can imagine it in my mind.great poem

Really inspiring, I liked the imagery :)
well done

I love trees. I feel like embracing them. I feel warm and protected. They are spirits that shine. Inspiring poem sista.