Comments : Tree Spirit

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Adorn your world in beauty
    hear the message of inspiration
    allow your soul to fly.

    I love this stanza the most because it sounds like we should free ourselves and enjoy and enjoy the beauty of the world. I mean there are parts that aren't beautiful but that's because we human have deteriorate the environment but if we adorn them then we can make it look beautiful too and we can also feel good about it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Its short, but it says a lot:) I love how ur nature poems r so refreshing:)
    Great poem I enjoyed reading it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautiful nature poem that I could feel myself float while reading. The words were beautiful and relaxing.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I love trees. I feel like embracing them. I feel warm and protected. They are spirits that shine. Inspiring poem sista.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Really inspiring, I liked the imagery :)
    well done

  • 12 years ago

    by neon sunset

    I love this poem. i can imagine it in my mind.great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    A inspirational poem of nature I truly enjoyed reading it as nature is our world of beauty that should inspire us

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    What a wonderful nature piece! It was so relaxing and refreshing to read. I just wanted to go sit under a tree and admire its beauty after reading this poem. You described a tree's spirit flawlessly with a breathy use of vocabulary. It just flowed together so nicely and I was just left wanting more of this serene scene. Trees are such majestic parts of nature that people can write books about it and it still wouldn't be enough. You packed it all in a nicely written poem that made me appreciate trees so much more. Loved it!

    "breathing a wind chime song
    tousled about within a breeze."

    ^Wow. If I had to pick a favorite part, which would be difficult, this would be it. I could hear the wind chimes in my mind so clearly and I ADORED your use of "tousled."