Comments : In that moment

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    That is a so very cute read, Tony. I wish you the best. And I hope you will always be in love :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was a great poem. Starting with:

    I have to keep rewinding the last six months
    over in my head
    what did i do in life to deserve an angel
    hand picked from god?

    This was sweet. We all love very much tht special someone. And you expresed that nicely here. Saying also why you deserve someone like that. Nice.

    When i run my fingers through
    her golden silk hair
    the moment engulfs me creating a heart beat
    i never knew exsisted

    I liked this part. your use of imagery was great with jsut the touch of her hair and your heart changes a beat.

    When she looks into my eyes i see my future,
    the reason why i breath
    I stand,hypnotised as her smile slowly catchs
    my eye and in that moment
    i know ...

    Im in love.

    This was great also. something about the eyes. You can see so much when looking into another's eyes. All in all a great job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    Awwww this is adorable :) I'm sure the girl who this poem is for loves it great job Tony :) xx

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Tony aww. She is lucky to have you too.

    All your poems are amazing. This is short and sweet but filled with true love. It's clear she means the world to you and I'm so glad you found a girl you care so deeply for :)

    When she read this im sure it made her heart skip a beat
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very sweet poem, the girl that's in your heart is a lucky girl :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wow. So cute..

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Very sweet and touching...<3

    wonderful poem!