Comments : The Dance

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

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  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a beautiful poem. The very nice imagery here was great. And the way you described the dance together just fit perfectly. Nice write sweetheart. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this piece is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really love the flow of this elegant piece, very romantic, and just....oh so pretty poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This was beautiful, and very sweet I thought it was enjoyable to read. Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I absalutley loved this poem and it is funny because i didn't evem know you'de written a new one but i saw it under top rated recent love poems...it was beautiful and very creative!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by William Mae

    Very good write, the moon makes a wonderful Disco ball, very good,

  • 12 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I liked the second stanza and how you said the moon is our disco ball.

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    I love the romance and the way the words flowed gracefully:D well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Love this poem is very well written! Great rhymes. Very sweet:)