Love the poem. so interesting and beautiful. its a piece of artwork that i admire. - please comment on a poem of mine

Goood job :)

OMG!, Now I see that you never missed a point in informing..You are quite mature for your age! Knowing the truth is believing..coz, I didn't necessarily have to see you, right? But somehow, please permit me to ask..could it be, you were forced to grow up!?? Lol..much enjoyed the read.. I guess, I need some more of this truth.