Such a powerful message within this small piece- much enjoyed-

Congratulations on a well deserved win-

I agree there is a certain appeal to this free verse, seemingly simple. It could do better with some grammatical revisions. Congratulations.

Congrats on the one, that is truly one great piece.

Definitely sad poem...but a good one at that congrats on the win.... :) its very deep in a short poem.

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