Oh Chelsey, that was like sad music to my ears.. so lovely..

goes (1st line) = go

Aww this shows how much u really love that person.
Great poem Chel, I love it:)

For love has made me realize
we must trust and hang on
inspite of lingering doubts

I gave my vote but I didn't comment. The above are the lines that I like the most about this poem. Trust is everything in a relationship once is lost then there is nothing else to do other than to try to regain it. But that's hard, unless there is really love by the other one.

I also agree with miss happiness that this shows how much you love this person and that's so sweet.

Oh what a beautiful love poem....

"I hope by then its not too late to say,
I can't live without you "

now this brought me to tears.... powerful and loving, heartfelt ending-

Ah Chelsey, excellent ..intense and beautiful

Chels, This was a beautiful piece.

I loved this line:
My fingers ride the waves of your tears
^^Was just such a poetic way of describing wiping away someone's tears, gentle and sweet.

My only critique is the title is way too cliche...

Otherwise, a really lovely piece

xx

Aww Chels, I truly loved this one!
So sweet and amazingly penned.
Glorious, simply glorious.

My being alive is by your doing
The very breath you breathe
is what keeps me going daily
The day your breaths become shorter
or your courageous heart stops beating
mine will vanish into thin air

i really liked thi stanza. Just shows you cant live without that person. The ending was amazing as well.